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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?

说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?

要求1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement

2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details

3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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