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题目 Be ware our favorite telephone

说明 A recent survey of 2,000 college students asked about their attitudes towards phone calls and text-messaging (also known as Short Message Service) and found the students’ main goal was to pass along information in as little time, with as little small talk, as possible. “What they like most about their mobile devices is that they can reach other people,” says Naomi Baron, a professor of linguistics at American University in Washington D.C, who conducted the survey. “What they like least is that other people can reach them.” How far do you agree with Professor Baron?

要求1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement

2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details

3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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Do you like phones? When college students are asked this question, and I suppose what they will answer. The recent survey about college student’s attitude toward phones aroused my interest. A result that what college students like phone most is that they can reach others and what they like least is that others can reach them is given by a professor. I am partially agree with the professor’s opinion as a college students and a member among the been survey  group, what I like phone most is that I can reach others and what I  like least is not others can reach me but it brings me  potential problems.
    In modern society, I can’t get by without my cell phone and I view it as a necessary tool to reach others. To begin with, I came to college and I am away from my families. Cell phones allow parental communication which can make me feel more secure. Besides, even if the crime rates are low, as a student I may find myself in situations where I feel unsafe.  Phones allow me to all for help when I feel unsafe. Cell phones allow me to call for help when I feel I need an escort. In a real emergency, where I need medical attention, a cell phone could prove lifesaving, and it brings me a safe .what’s more telephones allow me to have an always –on connection to my social network. I can use short time and few words to reach others at any time. I like phones which really bring me great convenience.
    However, for me, what I like phone least is that it brings me potential problems. I waste lots of time on mobile phones, obsessing with the QQ zone, wrapping in the games, chatting with others and so on. These are the visible effects. I think others also have this problem. What’s worse, phone brings indifference and distance between us, and this invisible effect is more awful. when my friend sand I have no phones, we get together playing and talking, but now we talking little when we get together. Everyone has a small screen, and we prefer engraining in the virtual world rather than communicating with our friends sitting beside us. A group of people sit together and play without communication. How awful that was. It is telephone that reducing our communication and bringing a gap between us. I found the telephone is the real subtle poison which is destroying people’s relationship .but few of us has realized this. Most of us just see it’s advantages and college students are addicted into it.
    Beware our favorite phone which is destroying our relationship. As college students we need realizing this and using our phone properly.

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