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题目看图作文：你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北（题目需自拟）

说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay

要求1.describe the drawing briefly

2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your comments

字数：200, 满分：100分

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As is illustrated in the picture, the two disabled persons whose crippled legs are bound together do a lot of traveling. Accordingly, this far-reaching picture reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: the people who are in the dark want to turn the corner but they cannot make it respectively and in turn they have to choose to pull together in times of trouble. 
    There are several reasons accounting for this. Since we have to live in an on-the-move lifestyle, we may encounter various plights, where we would be at a loss rather than to seek for others’ assistance. Further more, if we do not offer help to each other when we confront dilemma, we would not realize our dream. And no issue in China is as basic to build up the society in harmony as to conduct coordination in face of disasters. 
    Judging from what have been argued above, people have come to realize the value of mutual aid. It is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other. To begin with, the government should make laws to encourage people to unite. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they are in trouble. Only in those ways, can we make people, even not being acquaintance, help each other.

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