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说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay

要求1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning

2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your point of view

字数：200, 满分：100分

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As is vividly depicted in the drawing, in front of computers and in narrow spaces are sitting many people, exchanging their views with each other by surfing the Internet. How impressive the drawing is in describing the people’s addiction to the Internet. The drawer’s intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking.
    It holds apparent that the cartoon is indicative of a pervasive problem with regard to Internet. When it comes to Internet，its great impacts and benefits can’t be too estimated. It is the Internet that makes our big world become a global village. However, as a growing number of individuals are addicted to the Internet, they forget doing other important work and are gradually indulged in the virtual world, unwilling to go into the real society. As a consequence, they close their doors and never go out as soon as they return home from work, reluctant to have any face-to-face connection even with other folks except on line. What’s worse, they become indifferent to their friends, neighbors, as well as relatives.
    This phenomenon is harmful to us and our community too. As the pressure in life and work increases, we should learn to use proper ways to relieve it. It’s time that we took some measures to improve the situation. People can be organized to hold some activities together to develop some good hobbies. Consequently, we must make full use of Internet to do everything beneficial to make our daily life both joyful and meaningful.

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