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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication

要求1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.

2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"

3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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The past few decades have witnessed a phenomenal advancement in Internet technology, leading our traditional means of communication into a brand new era: E-communication. It has great impact upon our life.
    To begin with, Internet communication enables people to break though the limitations of distance, strengthening social network.
    Moreover，unlike post offices, Internet service with its convenience helps people engage and converse real time with their parents, soul mates, friends though emails, IRC, Twitter, Facebook anytime, anywhere with a network terminal, without suffering the long and painful wait for a reply.
    In addition to that, Internet exchange excels telephone in that it saves money and lets people see each other’s facial expressions when video chatting.
    Last, such online communities as Twitter, Facebook are well under way and becoming the most dominating platforms for on-line social activities. These communities offer opportunities for us to make friends with those we like and even those celebrities. It is also a platform for us to share and obtain information and keep up with on newest information and knowledge.
    Internet today is virtual space where we live, where we learn, where we speak, and where we communicate.

In contemporary society, our life is filled with a variety of anecdotes or stories, and the following is no exception: "Dad：Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad." Funny as it seems, this conversation can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on our life: In an era of Internet, the time for interpersonal communication is impaired by online chats or blogs.
    Apparently, the impacts of the Internet on interpersonal communication are diverse. For one thing, as a vital invention, Internet brings great convenience to our communication, eliminates the barrier of distance, and helps humans to keep in touch wherever and whenever. For another, it is Internet that does not enables family members, friends or classmates to communicate more in a face-to-face way. One case in point is that youngsters may spend hours chatting with acquaintances through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face. Unfortunately, it we let this trend to continue as it is, the interpersonal relationship will, definitely, become alienated.
    To my understanding, it is advisable for people to communicate more with their families, friends and acquaintances in real life instead of merely through the Internet. Do bear in mind: Internet is just a tool.

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